Tiku akp

A Drop Of Rain - Poem by Tiku akp

I hold in my palm
And peep inside the sphere
From the sparkling surface
To deep into its middle
It is pure and clear

I shake my palm
A little and it rolls
And rolls like a bead of pearl
I feel its coolness
Runs throughout my frame
And take care to save it from a fall

I can’t stay here long
For much work is waiting
Sorry, this game should be finished
I turn my hand
Upside down; the drop
Falls flat and in an instant got vanished

Comments about A Drop Of Rain by Tiku akp

  • Freshman - 674 Points Aileen Figueroa (11/7/2015 9:03:00 AM)

    The simple things in life. Funny, we cannot even enjoy them. Funny you found delight in something so simple as a drop of water. And that is why I clearly enjoy this poem ;-) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,174 Points Bharati Nayak (7/11/2015 7:00:00 AM)

    Some moments are like that drop of water we want to hold in our palm.Nice imagery and beautiful penning.
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  • Rookie - 133 Points Maryanne Richards (5/27/2014 4:52:00 PM)

    Simply beautiful. Thank you for your comment on my poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,181 Points Leloudia Migdali (5/7/2014 2:39:00 PM)

    Such a wonderful watery poem.I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,033 Points Savita Tyagi (8/24/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. Like a little rain drop we all are. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,434 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/24/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    Very nice. Could actually see the raindrop in my own hand and playing with it. Not wanting to let it go, yet it vanished the same as yours did. Good poem, could relate totally to it. Keep writing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,965 Points Lorraine Colon (8/22/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    So for a brief moment you were mesmerized by a drop of rain. What a lovely thought. Very nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/22/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    a beautiful moment soon lost in the maze of reality!

    lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 21, 2013

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