Magic Box

Rookie - 0 Points (September 3,1992)

2013


My heartfelt love was true
You nodded sweet and shy
Like cloud, to heights that flew
With joy I rose to sky

That wind has changed it's way
Moved far away from shore
I want it not to stay
Coz, I now know you no more

Submitted: Sunday, December 08, 2013

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That pretty much sums up my 2013. That lonely cloud poured downward along with rain to the empty sea. Wish you all a happy and prosperous New Year. I guess I should wish me too!

Comments about this poem (2013 by Magic Box )

  • Gold Star - 25,464 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/27/2014 11:51:00 AM)

    It seems a parting flying kiss to 2013. a beautiful style. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (12/18/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    A very nice write. Wish you a very Happy New Year 2014 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/17/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    Be always ready with your dreams
    and march towards it.
    See your dreams comes true in 2014.
    Believe it.
    Definitely you will remember my words!
    Wishing you a happy and prosperous New Year 2014.
    God Bless You! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (12/14/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    .. happy new year to you too.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (12/9/2013 10:54:00 PM)

    Who can make us unhappy when our mind says that it is always happy.
    Our happiness is Aswath, your happiness too. Let us make a big crowd of very very happy people.
    2013 went like a fleeting cloud that refused to rain over us.
    2014 is likely to rain over us differently right from May in India and let us see what it is going to be like though our options are limited. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (12/9/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    With the knell of parting year, we are made to look back to the months gone by.2013 must have offered you a mixed pack. Let the coming year be one of great promises and fulfillment! Wish you my boy, all joy and blessings in the ensuing year! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (12/8/2013 4:15:00 AM)

    The year is drawing to a close and we reflect on our 2013 journey as we move forward with renewed zest!
    A lovely write and a happy new year to you! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points Kavya . (12/8/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    Hey good...happy new yr to u too bro (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 710 Points Shahzia Batool (12/8/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    Wish you a happy, prosperous and fulfilled new year to you too! (Report) Reply

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