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Eulogy

For my thousand dreams and broken wing,
As some final words what would you sing?

How gentle I was or how righteous my acts,
In midst of strong winds how I stayed intact!

How much I loved and how I’ll be missed,
How boldly I saw death and gently kissed,

What would you say? The truth or some lie?
While mourning for me when I simply die?

Silence will win where life looses the game,
Unspoken words cause tears from my frame!

Submitted: Wednesday, August 07, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013


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Definitely I wont be there. So I just want to hear beforehand!

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  • Kanav Justa (12/17/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    like the theme you wrote on, , , , you way to express your poems is great, , , , , specia; ; y the last two lines in this poem were very powerful, , , you have a lot of creativity inside you, , , always keep penning, , ,

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  • Lyn Paul (10/18/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    Magic, I loved reading your poet notes and thank you for being so open. Your Eulogy is superb which I have saved. I have been a Funeral director and a celebrant attending many Funerals. I feel at peace within the cemeteries yet I am not ready to pass on until my time is ready. For I believe I am really needed on this earth. Just as you are!

  • Chandana Khan (8/28/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    he had 1000 dreams and broken wings like all other human beings but he was loved and respected by all due to his goodness as i can C in his a few poems. he luvd his country and he wrote neat poems.
    im sure i wil need to say it after 10,000 years dear big brother.i wsh u live more and write more :))) 10 marks 4 ds.

  • Nikita Dutt (8/23/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    they are some stunning words put together... love the last lines..
    Silence will win where life looses the game,
    Unspoken words cause tears from my frame!

  • Heather Wilkins (8/21/2013 5:35:00 PM)

    lovely words from the magic box

  • Akshaya Pawasker (8/20/2013 1:37:00 AM)

    Beautiful write.interesting to think how people would react after your death.i do that quite often.

  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/19/2013 5:57:00 PM)

    interesting theme and interesting way to express it
    i love your imagery, what can i say, its tender but wild
    and your words, simple but meaningful
    very good works

  • Kavya . (8/16/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    why do u want to hear beforehand! Magic Box, u simply think out of the box, very much out of the box, ur wild imaginations and innovative writes I really admire......but I have no answers for the questions u have posted above, as i feel its too early to comment..........May God grant u a long life of health wealth and happiness and may ur mood swings be in control............

  • Indranil Bhaduri (8/16/2013 12:25:00 AM)

    Beautifully written.. Well done

  • Valerie Dohren (8/15/2013 2:34:00 PM)

    A very well written poem asking a big question - we would all like to believe people will think and speak well of us after we arevgone.

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