You're Alive Poem by Ace Of Black Hearts

You're Alive

Rating: 4.5


Your writing with no emotion.
Sway me, take me on journey through your eyes with words of feeling that you surmise.
Capturing a shooting star, making a wish, eliminating all sadness.
Inviting all the madness but only if you can feel it.
Only if you can steal it.
Bring life to what was dead and dormant inside.
You're alive.
So tell me.
So show me.
Bringing down the darkening midnight skies.
Even if only for one night.
It's long enough.
I know it can be rough.
But just know you're not alone.
So own it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 23 August 2020

This is so HUGE. It rings with challenge. I am definitely a fan of your poetry. 10++++

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