Ace Of Black Hearts

Veteran Poet - 1,668 Points (04/17/1984 / Homa Lousiana)

Comments about Ace Of Black Hearts

  • V P Mahur V P Mahur (3/26/2014 4:53:00 AM)

    Dear Sir,
    A very sweet and nice poem this one. i liked it.

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  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/14/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Black hearts reformed into one sculpture of one dark chamber, the Ace...As black poetry be your wall, framing the soul, mind, thought and yourself inside it...but dont be fooled by the dark heart color as inside it is brighter..like a bulb covered by black glass but when it sparking light the bright still reach outside..you too...sometimes it sounds dark by poetry but the true of what you mean carry the contrast...that is the pureness of Ace, Ace of Black Hearts...a talented poet in other words if i can say here_Soul

Here's The Antidote

Oh I got the antidote.
Oh how bad do you need it?
Would you still be willing to eat it, if told you.
Oh if I only told you..
Here comes the invitation into darkness.
A madness with ears ringing to the point of bleeding.
A heart still sinking.
A sudden complication and so slows the breathing.
Oh I got the antidote.

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