You. Poem by Nicco Muegge

You.

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I fell asleep in your eyes the other day
a pool of brown
You captured me with you words yesterday
with out making a sound
I lived for your smile last week
never to die
I'll love you everyday next week
from outside, inside
I dreamt a dream of you last night
we didn't do much
I'll probably have the same dream tonight
regarding your touch

We walked through the field of lilies
a sky of green
We flew to clouds above the lilies
probably a dream
Your hand squeezed harder as we got higher
the grass is blue
You drew closer to me as we got higher
right on cue
I open my eyes to a new place again
a pool of brown
You put me to sleep with your words again
with out making a sound.

I must've fallen asleep.

Monday, August 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

a pool of brown I lived for your smile walked through the field of lilies We flew to clouds You drew closer to me as we got higher These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations. Fine poem. Great imagination, love, desire.. so fine. tony

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Nicco Muegge

Nicco Muegge

Houston, Texas
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