Yellowed Gorse Poem by Fay Slimm

Yellowed Gorse

Rating: 5.0


Humble, prickly, yet nearly a golden sea
Of gorse this time of year engulfs my soul,
Rippling delight down the yellowed freeway
As I travel into dusk, evokes whole -
Hearted rush to motor home. Gorsey moors
And silver hedgerows fill my Cornish mind
At springtime. I insist all city doors
Be shut, and along with high-life, leave behind
All fetid air, to reach this countryside,
Where hill flowers, banking down to brush my feet
Join nodding daffodils. Seems, far and wide,
Spring is spilling over me. Then, replete
With restful air and quiet, have of course
To leave the heavenly scent of yellowed gorse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 21 March 2009

A nice fresh poem about the yellow gorse, which has a distinctive smell which can be brought to mind, thanks Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Fiona Davidson 21 March 2009

Beautiful piece Fay...you paint the countryside so well...it's like taking a walk through it reading your poem...thank you...Fi 10+++

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Catrina Heart 21 March 2009

great rhymes and rhythm Fay! I loved the poetic flow and imagery...............10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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