Child's E-Mail To God. Poem by Fay Slimm
Child's E-Mail To God.
Dear God I am riting this to let you no
My Mom's coff got worse and she's just ad to go.
I dont no your E-mail but your everywhere
So sum angel will give it you God, cos you care.
Mom's gone to an ospital they called a Respite
I think that's the name - an I hope it's spelled rite.
They won't let me go cos it's too far away.
But they dont no she hates eggs, an she wont like to say.
Her coff isn't bad when she first gets in bed
But she likes extra pillas God, under er head.
My Mom's got red air, tho she's not got much now
But she likes it combed gently, or else there's a row.
She's got such good teeth God, an beootiful smile
Her nightys are pretty too, she likes keepin in style.
I hope someone reads to her every night - - -
Then says God bless ya and ope bed bugs dont bite.
I thought I would tell you sum things they won't no
And God, cos your busy, I'll sign this off now.
But I wanted to say God before I press send,
She's got nobody there, so please God, be her frend.
Fay, a poem that deserves a larger audience. Top class piece of writing, that left me sad at the content, but happy at your skill.10/10 Ian
Whay a delight - written as if from a child emailing God. Brilliant and very moving.
What a touching poem. This is an exceptional write. I especially liked the dialect you used to draw the reader into the poem. Lovely poem.
Hi Fay. This is a wonderful piece of work. I like the style very much well done. deserving nothing less than a 10 thankyou. Regards Dave
This is a letter to God full of emotion and praise to God. A letter that brings tear in eyes and gives feeling to feel a child's mind and her affection towards mother. God will definitely be friend of her and her mother. A heart touching mail sent to God is beautifully penned. This is an outstanding poem and readers will love to read this poem again and again.
Excellent piece. What an original thought! I can only add my appreciation to the well-earned praise you have merited with this one.
A small gem of its kind. Ten seems inadequate here. Thank you for all the lovely comments on my work. Each one is treasured. Wishing you and your gifted pen only the best. Love, Sandra
That's sweet, I feel sorry for the poor mite. It's full of innocent childish feeling, and it is a childish style of writing - the language and spelling errors for one thing! Thanks, we can learn a lot from this
This is unquestionably a poem by a masterful poet, Fay, written just as a child would write it-a difficult task for those so fluent in the language. It is simple yet profound and deeply touching to all who read this beautiful poem. It was so realistically expressed and modern as well. Once again, your talent shines in this brilliant poem. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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WOW! ! ! This is absolutely perfect, Fay you have really pushed the boat out this time.I love this poem. fond regards Tom 10 +++