And What Of Passion? Poem by Fay Slimm

Hi Fay. A really well written piece which I enjoyed. It rolls through so nicely, and is full of warmth and expressive feeling. As you know, I'm not a 'love' writer, but I do find your work moving. Best Steve

Full of sincerity...a lovely write Fay...10+ Sue

a lovely write showing the different faces of passion.....10

Lovely poem, nicely examined/composed passion from different views.

Without passion in life, i would lay down and die my life's blood would curdle, harden and dry its my mainstay in life, why i persist passion means love, its why i exist a very moving poem Fay, passionatly written, by a passionate person!

An insightful piece of poetry elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Truly your passion for writing this amazing poetry shines through and touches us all. Thank you for allowing us the honour of reading and enjoying it.

Yes very good fay I wonder what we would be like without all the taboos and social conditioning we recieve from day one.Would we give vent to our primordal instincts or are we hard wiered for constraint jim

You have hit the nail on the head Fay, Sid xx.

This is a wonderfully written and expressed poem, Fay, and I must add my two cents of wisdom to agree with you that life without passion is even duller than watching grass grow! Passion is the spark of life and love, and when a passionate person is matched with a lover of equal or even more passion, those sparks of love to fly! Passion is indeed the spice of life and love, and you portrayed that most beautifully in this sterling poem, Fay. Carl.