Y// My Wish Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// My Wish

Rating: 5.0


Sitting in the quietude
of the early morning,
I feel peace and love
in the air around us.
What a wonderful present,
from the universe, from God!

The magic of the morning.
Daybreak announcing itself
by the marvellous song of a bird

My heart prays silently
for a day filled with peace,
filled with love and beauty,
and this is also my wish for you.

Thursday, July 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,morning,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Kind wish for all...with beauty and love lies in every line! Thanks Hans for your wish and words!

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 July 2019

Yes, mornings are such wonderful gifts of God. And it does make a difference when an alarm clock wakes you up, or the call of birds welcoming dawn.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 July 2019

A heartwarming poem, Aufie...10+++++

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Hans Vr 12 July 2019

Thanks, Bernard.

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Jane Campion 11 July 2019

A poem full of kindness to yourself and others.

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Hans Vr 12 July 2019

Thanks, Jane

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 July 2019

A wonderful poem enjoying the mirth exuded by the dawn and the nature as a whole celebrating it's onset. In such an electrifying atmosphere one feels oneself blessed and his thinking too becomes sublimated and he wishes that others too must be blessed; Thanks for sharing this inspirational life song.10 points.

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Hans Vr 12 July 2019

Many thanks for the lovely comment.

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