Cherret Leakey


Write Down. - Poem by Cherret Leakey

Hey,
You dream of something?
Wow that is great then.
Well,
Another step forward is this-
Get up
and go for a pen.
Draft the content of your dream
and print the blueprints
before the dream drifts away.
Don't let it fade with the day,
Secure it today.
This way,
Your dream will make pay-
some day-
When your dream is actually *actionized.

*actionaized-coined from the word 'act'

By Cherret Leakey.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem highlights one of the political strategies of an ambitions character in a play that I am working on currently. The play is centered around campus politics.

Comments about Write Down. by Cherret Leakey

  • Rookie Murasaki Hikari (10/25/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    I like it very much. Smart, well thought and very direct. Not very touching though. But I am a bit of dark fan, so what do I know? Don't count my opinion. U are good.: D (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,879 Points Amitava Sur (10/23/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    Well thought penning. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 857 Points Margaret Moran (10/21/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    All your poems are well done. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aiden Bird (10/18/2013 6:21:00 PM)

    it's smart! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Crystal Ruth (10/17/2013 3:58:00 PM)

    I like it but at first I didn't really then as I read it I liked it :) Very nice thought :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,047 Points Liqi Leakey (10/17/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Guys, I love your comments. keep them coming. i will look at them and conform to your advices if they truely add value to my writing.
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anton Walai (10/16/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    leaky, mi like the way your poem is to the theme....it's like saying something in a brief and precise manner leaving the audience with a complete thought of your work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Thomas Duncky (10/16/2013 7:02:00 AM)

    I do not want to lie about my feelings on this poem. I find it has a message you want to communicate and unless i am mistaken you have vaguely managed that, instead i feel you have mixed up whatever you wanted to say in order to create a rhythm which is not of paramount importance this type of poetry which won't be read aloud. And the title? From me Leakey it's 4.5/10 but i'll proceed to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dohhoon Yang (10/16/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    Good I agree with you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (10/16/2013 2:31:00 AM)

    Very nice thought and message too.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (10/15/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    may your dream come true, good work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,344 Points Ramesh Rai (10/15/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    very nice. but i have the weakness. I also do dream but it drifts away before actionized. This poem is indeed a great message for a man like me who can not conceal even a single word. must vote for EXCELLENT (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tycoon Arap (9/28/2013 9:28:00 AM)

    Great work leakey, I love the way this poem is captivating. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 16, 2013


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