Cherret Leakey


Write Down. - Poem by Cherret Leakey

Hey,
You dream of something?
Wow that is great then.
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem highlights one of the political strategies of an ambitions character in a play that I am working on currently. The play is centered around campus politics.

Comments about Write Down. by Cherret Leakey

  • Rookie Murasaki Hikari (10/25/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    I like it very much. Smart, well thought and very direct. Not very touching though. But I am a bit of dark fan, so what do I know? Don't count my opinion. U are good.: D (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Amitava Sur (10/23/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    Well thought penning. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 795 Points Margaret Moran (10/21/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    All your poems are well done. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aiden Bird (10/18/2013 6:21:00 PM)

    it's smart! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Crystal Ruth (10/17/2013 3:58:00 PM)

    I like it but at first I didn't really then as I read it I liked it :) Very nice thought :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,047 Points Liqi Leakey (10/17/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Guys, I love your comments. keep them coming. i will look at them and conform to your advices if they truely add value to my writing.
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anton Walai (10/16/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    leaky, mi like the way your poem is to the theme....it's like saying something in a brief and precise manner leaving the audience with a complete thought of your work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Thomas Duncky (10/16/2013 7:02:00 AM)

    I do not want to lie about my feelings on this poem. I find it has a message you want to communicate and unless i am mistaken you have vaguely managed that, instead i feel you have mixed up whatever you wanted to say in order to create a rhythm which is not of paramount importance this type of poetry which won't be read aloud. And the title? From me Leakey it's 4.5/10 but i'll proceed to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dohhoon Yang (10/16/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    Good I agree with you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (10/16/2013 2:31:00 AM)

    Very nice thought and message too.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (10/15/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    may your dream come true, good work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,089 Points Ramesh Rai (10/15/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    very nice. but i have the weakness. I also do dream but it drifts away before actionized. This poem is indeed a great message for a man like me who can not conceal even a single word. must vote for EXCELLENT (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tycoon Arap (9/28/2013 9:28:00 AM)

    Great work leakey, I love the way this poem is captivating. (Report) Reply










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