Whispers Poem by Heather Burns

Whispers

Rating: 3.5


Winds
keep
catching
your whispers
voices in my ear
lingering in the evening breeze.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fibonacci 1-1-2-3-5-8 syllable count
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 September 2014

Spying through winds or what lovely

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Patti Masterman 14 July 2013

The language and style of this reminds me a bit of some oriental poetry I've read; the Chinese in particular, in some ancient forms will compose a piece built around a single impression or image, which is then elaborated upon in a pure, pristine fashion.

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Danny Draper 13 July 2013

Gentle as a days sigh into a coming night.

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Hazel Durham 13 July 2013

Beautiful with soft whispers in the wind! !

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