Who Are Who? Who Am I? Poem by Heather Burns

Who Are Who? Who Am I?

Rating: 5.0


Who are you?
who am I?

We are products
of many journeys

What we have
experienced
makes us who
we are today

We are time
travelers
caught in
a revolving
time capsule

Being shaped
for this life

Who am I?
Who are you?

we are two
spirits
coming together
learning from
each others
past perils

Preparing
ourselves
for tomorrow
looking to the
future with
anticipation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asal Banu 13 August 2013

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee like it :)

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Manonton Dalan 13 August 2013

so true i love it. yes we are

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Neela Nath Das 13 August 2013

Beautiful.The style is different and the theme represented in fabulous packet.Loved.

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Ramesh Rai 13 August 2013

an enthusiastic write preparing for tomorrow. loved your write

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Dave Walker 14 August 2013

A great poem, there is many journeys to come.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 August 2013

Two time travelers preparing for tomorrow. Nice image. Thank you.

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Savita Tyagi 14 August 2013

Beautiful poem. We unite in essence and move toward that unity despite our differences. Enjoyed reading. A deep philosophy penned so well with so much ease.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

very true we grow up with experiences and we learn from it very beautiful poem

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Lucifera Santez 14 August 2013

as usual, your mastery of words. a very beautiful write. loved it. a 10 for it. :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Beautiful poem...with deep meaning in it.. Journey will go on crossing all the way from past to present and future too will be crossed...fantastic write. Loved reading each lines.

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