Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 4,413 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Where The Wild Gulls Fly - Poem by Valerie Dohren

O lift me high upon the wind,
To where the wild gulls fly -
Above the mighty ocean’s swell,
Across the sapphire sky.

My refuge be the sailing ships
Which brave the raging seas,
And isles adorned with swaying Palms,
My heart to thus appease.

Then circling high above the storms
Of life’s beleaguered trail -
O carry me to distant shores,
To fly o’er hill and vale.

The wild gulls cry, the sweetest sound,
Is calling, calling me -
And I shall follow where they lead,
To where I shall be free.

O lift me high upon the wind,
To where the wild gulls fly -
Beyond all things that serve to bind,
Above the earth, so high.

And higher still to realms unknown
To mortal man below -
Behold the sun, behold the moon,
And dawn’s soft afterglow.

May air as sweet as angels’ breath
Caress me as I soar -
To feel nirvana’s soft embrace,
Enfold me evermore.

Comments about Where The Wild Gulls Fly by Valerie Dohren

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (7/25/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    Your poems take us part-way there Val. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 823 Points Juan Olivarez (7/15/2013 6:42:00 PM)

    Such a lovely poem. Reminds me of my home in Galveston. Which I always long for, but now is somewhat a sadder place. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 163 Points Meena Mustafa (7/2/2013 9:20:00 AM)

    Such a lovely poem.... I was imagining myself in this poem :) Great penning! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,092 Points Hans Vr (6/29/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    I was flying while reading the poem. A fantastic ending (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,933 Points Hazel Durham (6/29/2013 2:31:00 PM)

    Wonderful escapism to be able to fly so high as the wild seagulls and hear their haunting cry!
    Amazing rhythm and flow! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,781 Points Anthony Di''anno (6/25/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    Uplifting Val. Your rhyming is exquisite. A joy as ever :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (6/25/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    The rhythm and rhyme in this is awesome :) I really love it when you rhyme! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (6/23/2013 7:38:00 AM)

    I have never thought the sea gulls could fly so well. I would like to presume one Valerie from Southport could give them a great company.. I am afraid to fly unlike you and Valsa though. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,022 Points Valsa George (6/23/2013 2:44:00 AM)

    This is an amazing write! Lifting the soul to magical realms! Let me also join you in your aerial journey along with the flying flock of seagulls... Val and Val hand in hand? ? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,406 Points Om Chawla (6/22/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    Excellent. How well you have penned the yearning of the Self [soul] to free itself and soar high: 'Beyond all things that serve to bind'... and
    'And higher still to realms unknown
    To mortal men below'..................
    and then again the last stanza: -
    ' May air as sweet as angels' breath
    .....Enfold me ever more'

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (6/22/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    such sweet and calming piece of poetry, beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points G.R. Gaus (6/21/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Is there any subject you cannot make into a beautiful rhyme? I think not; this one is really peaceful..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,037 Points Lorraine Colon (6/20/2013 5:10:00 PM)

    I love the cry of the gulls - something mystical about them. Such a good poem, I can almost feel the salty spray of the sea. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,877 Points David Wood (6/20/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    It flows beautifully like a stream. This poem leaves a lovely feel and afterglow. Thanks Val. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,270 Points Sandra Feldman (6/20/2013 3:32:00 AM)

    The Sea, the Wind, the Wild Gulls, Will most certainly make you free.
    Imagination what a sensation.We can go, we can fly without a plane, without a ship and have a glorious trip.
    I really enjoyed this poem airy, salty full of beauty, nature and life, far away from the civilized hipe.So natural and lovely in its simplicity.Those are the best ones, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (6/20/2013 3:07:00 AM)

    Definitely an uplifting piece on smooth gentle currents of verse to bring peace to any heart. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Dave Walker (6/20/2013 1:38:00 AM)

    A really beautiful flowing poem. A fantastic write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (6/19/2013 2:45:00 PM)

    Just a beautiful, lovely feeling poem, Val. Just in time for summer at the beach. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 20, 2013

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