Cassandra Jasmine

Rookie - 54 Points (United States of Awesomeness)

Where Horses Roam Free - Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

Where Horses roam free: Rocky Terrain.
They find comfort in sun and rain.
Who are untamable mustangs
Are like and unbreakable chain.

In lush green valleys, and plain
Forest dwellings, a mare that’s in pain,
Gives a whinny, then hears a bang,
Where horses roam free.

Colts give mock fights, faking insane,
Then thundering over hilly plains.
The North Wind flies by, like one sang,
Where horses roam free.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is my first try at writing a Rondeau... Or is it Rondo? I also love horses, so here is my poem! :)

Comments about Where Horses Roam Free by Cassandra Jasmine

  • Gold Star - 16,316 Points John Westlake (8/26/2014 5:18:00 PM)

    Where horses roam free, reminds me of the wild mustangs most of whom were never tamed. The most famous if I remember correctly was the white mustang who somehow managed to disappear while surrounded by hunters. Nice one (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,193 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/27/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Your verses roam free, just as the horses (of your poem) roam free! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 21, 2013

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