Cassandra Jasmine

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Where Horses Roam Free


Where Horses roam free: Rocky Terrain.
They find comfort in sun and rain.
Who are untamable mustangs
Are like and unbreakable chain.

In lush green valleys, and plain
Forest dwellings, a mare that’s in pain,
Gives a whinny, then hears a bang,
Where horses roam free.

Colts give mock fights, faking insane,
Then thundering over hilly plains.
The North Wind flies by, like one sang,
Where horses roam free.

Submitted: Tuesday, August 20, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 21, 2013

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This is my first try at writing a Rondeau... Or is it Rondo? I also love horses, so here is my poem! :)

Comments about this poem (Where Horses Roam Free by Cassandra Jasmine )

  • Gold Star - 15,145 Points John Westlake (8/26/2014 5:18:00 PM)

    Where horses roam free, reminds me of the wild mustangs most of whom were never tamed. The most famous if I remember correctly was the white mustang who somehow managed to disappear while surrounded by hunters. Nice one (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,149 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/27/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Your verses roam free, just as the horses (of your poem) roam free! (Report) Reply

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