louis rams

Freshman - 800 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

**************what A Woman Can Do***************1979 - Poem by louis rams

when a woman can bring beauty into the heart of man
she knows that she is on the right track.
for man will always try to hide the feelings
he has locked up inside.
it is an emotion he will try to deny.

but when he looks upon your face
he will know it's no disgrace
to let his feelings all unwind
and want to be with you til the end of time.

for a woman can bring out the feelings that he never knew
she can take away the sadness and heartaches
he may have gone through.
to make him feel he can confide in you.

'this is what a woman can do'.


Comments about **************what A Woman Can Do***************1979 by louis rams

  • Rookie - 165 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/17/2010 1:18:00 PM)

    ‘for a woman can bring out the feelings that he never knew’ …sure modern medicine has discovered ‘endorphin’ luller from brain…augmented by state inner calmness that women can trigger…you’ve nicely stated ‘eye-language’ and its interpretation…like stories that eye can tell…a ‘heart-to-heart’ poetry..thanks Sir
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (9/3/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    Hey I agree to this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Only a woman can/. cause I kinda know this feeling..
    Hey I will quote you a song I know! ! !

    Only a woman can by Brain Macfadden

    I wasn’t perfect
    I’ve done a lot of stupid things
    Still no angel
    I wasn’t looking for forgiveness
    Wasn’t laid out by my pride
    Shocked by her attention
    And someone signed me up for love
    I didn’t want it
    And now I can’t live without it

    She changed my life
    She cleaned me up
    She found my heart
    Like only a woman can
    She pulls me up
    When she knows I’m sad
    She knows her man
    Like only a woman can

    She’s kind of perfect
    She’s kind of everything I’m not
    Yeah, she’s an angel
    And it’s amazing how she’s patient
    Even more at times I’m not
    She’s my conscience
    And who decided I’d be hers
    I wanna hate them
    Cos now I can’t live without her

    She changed my life
    She cleaned me up
    She found my heart
    Like only a woman can
    She pulls me up
    When she knows I’m sad
    She knows her man
    Like only a woman can

    Like only a woman can
    And who decided I’d be hers
    I wanna hate them
    Cos now I can’t live without her

    Oh, and she changed my life
    She cleaned me up
    She found my heart
    Like only a woman can
    She pulls me up
    When she knows I’m sad
    She knows her man
    Like only a woman can

    Like only a woman can
    Like only a woman can
    Like only a woman
    Like only a woman can

    Yet, the case is woman can make your life miserable too, I mean woman can even make a man run like a crazy, headless chicken, that is what Gorden Wilkinson said after he read one of my poems...

    But I know, only a woman can,
    nice to read..

    lv
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    for a woman can bring out the feelings that he never knew
    she can take away the sadness and heartaches
    he may have gone through.
    to make him feel he can confide in you.

    'this is what a woman can do'. it is million rupee question and no one can answer it as truth prevail is so spremeand high that it can not judged. woman is allt here for our success in the form of mother.daughter.siters and they all play significant role...i loved the them and write....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michelle Kafka (9/3/2009 7:13:00 PM)

    An exquisite write. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (8/31/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    Friend what about the other side. Wish to see you draft it too. Nice and interesting lines to ponder. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/30/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    very true to the last world...god has made woman differently (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 30, 2009


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