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louis rams

Rookie - 457 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

**************the touch**********************1979


i looked up into the deep blue sky
little white clouds were floating by
i looked upon this young girls face
she held it down in disgrace.

i looked upon her cheeks so fair
she looked up to me to see if i care
i looked at her with content
and she knew right there it was heaven sent.

she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched
we knew then, it was much to much.
our hearts entwined and her lips met mine
we felt right there it was a love divine.

Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2009

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  • Rookie - 35 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/1/2010 6:52:00 AM)

    ‘…we felt right there it was a love divine…’

    Rhapsodic state reached…and final culmination what we pine for…
    Thanks for sharing…
    Ten
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,251 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2009 10:07:00 PM)

    she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched
    we knew then, it was much to much.
    our hearts entwined and her lips met mine
    we felt right there it was a love divine...it is unique divine touch and happens to only few gifted individuals with pure heart... lovely poem with very good message in it... i love it.....10

    read mine anywhere..bbutterflies around and colour (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (9/19/2009 10:48:00 PM)

    I loved this rhyming couplet..

    'our hearts entwined and her lips met mine
    we felt right there it was a love divine.'

    very nice to read.. lovely poem indeed.. filled with emotions..10

    regards
    shan (Report) Reply

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