' I Am ' Sky #4 Series Poem by louis rams

' I Am ' Sky #4 Series

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' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
' i am ' dark clouds when i cry for justice
' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
the stars are my teeth in a smile
with the universe.
the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
the heavy rains are my tears.

the light rains is my contentment
of a new birth.
the rainbows is my heart at rest.

' i am' SKY.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Mkhonza 10 December 2016

A lovely poem. Beats words for it is terse and goes to the heart with a message so clear yet also simple you wish you had written it yourself for daily everyone is sky. I love this poem.

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Bharati Nayak 31 January 2024

Revisiting this poem, a captivating write, its beauty never ends!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2020

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. The inscription on sky and qualities as per colors according to your mood has been fantastically made. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Lee Boueri 05 December 2019

Lovely read, lovely images.

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Louis Rams 14 December 2019

i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting.

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Louis Rams 14 December 2019

i am sorry for the late response and i thank you for coming to my page and commenting

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Louis Rams 14 December 2019

i am sorry for my late response and i thank you so much for coming to my page and commenting

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Jane Campion 03 August 2019

I love the images in your poem. Thank you for commenting on What Remains.

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Louis Rams 03 August 2019

if you see the images then I have achieved my goal

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Prabir Gayen 09 March 2019

the light rains is my contentment of a new birth. the rainbows is my heart at rest. ' i am' SKY....good one

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