louis rams

Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

' I Am ' Sky #4 Series - Poem by louis rams

' i am ' sky
my colors are my moods
' i am' light blue when i'm at peace
' i am ' dark blue when i'm troubled
' i am ' dark clouds when i cry for justice
' i am ' light clouds when i'm in thought
the stars are my teeth in a smile
with the universe.
the lightning bolts is my anger in full fury.
the heavy rains are my tears.

the light rains is my contentment
of a new birth.
the rainbows is my heart at rest.

' i am' SKY.

Comments about ' I Am ' Sky #4 Series by louis rams

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (9/24/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    A masterpiece of masterpieces Louis. What a beautiful description
    of the sky in all of its glorious splendor. I especially love the line The stars
    are the teeth in my smile. A beautiful and awesome description. Truly
    loved this! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,076 Points Wahab Abdul (5/20/2013 7:12:00 PM)

    very nice..colours express your thought..and you are the sky.. lovely poem indeed.. and you got 80 votes for that.. kudos.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Roneece Pieters (9/11/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    it was so beautifully true. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,671 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/19/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    'The rainbows is my heart at rest'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 97,767 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    i am ' sky
    my colors are my moods..... in emptiness u r everything... housing numerous stars, beautiful moon and rainbow to refelct your mood and elegance...10

    read mine.. i could hear.... serious thought and rain has come (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christine Kerr (4/2/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Your teeth are like stars they come out at night. Couldn't resist Louis, I think a great description if you were trying to describe the universe to a blind person. Well rounded. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (3/30/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    A very unique use of metaphors. I like your colors. Lovely.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Vaibhav Pandey (3/30/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    a good imaginative write.......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/29/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    now this is your most unique piece. i really like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/29/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    lovely poem...each comparison was very apt...light blue..dark blue...stars...lightning...rain (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christine Kerr (3/29/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    This one is a beautiful sign of what you could call the lords personality. Another good one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 29, 2009

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