Waterfall Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Waterfall

Rating: 5.0


Torrents of water
Rocket over the edge to
Drive away its past

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fonia Tan 15 July 2012

Its vibrant energy slushes up Above the puny rocks below Its roar of magnitude infinity As it hits The minute grains of sands On a tiny island. Oh, what can be compared than to the vastless and bottomless sea? Yet sadly Its beauty is no longer abound It awaits its death around.

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Farah Ilyas 17 April 2013

nice haiku...reflects your poetic thought of composition & expression..

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Farah Ilyas 17 April 2013

nice haiku, have a deep meaning inside....haiku reflects poetic thought..great

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Walterrean Salley 02 September 2012

This is a beautiful haiku, Tiffany, well written and structured. You've done a great job. Enjoyed very much.

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Rick Elpers 30 July 2012

Wow! ! Seriously Wow. I love when true art says volumes, with minimal expression. Makes it all the more powerful. Beautiful.

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 July 2012

Beautiful image these three short lines create.I have a doubt in the use of the phrase 'rocket over'. pl. verify its usage in a dictionary.

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