I try to keep from using the same word twice. Difficult I know but it opens up so many more ways to express an idea. I am honored you chose me to critique your poems, but honestly I'm just a hack having a little fun. - R -
Been reading some of your poems, your really good! Id like to see more of your work. I can tell you take your time in every one of them you wright. Keep up the great work and I look forward in talking to you. (:
Home, what we run and flee to Hope, what we turn our backs to Love, when we know we need each other
We cannot always walk away.
Why do we try so hard to ignore This simple key to comfort? Why do we try so hard and ignore