I try to keep from using the same word twice. Difficult I know but it opens up so many more ways to express an idea. I am honored you chose me to critique your poems, but honestly I'm just a hack having a little fun. - R -
Been reading some of your poems, your really good! Id like to see more of your work. I can tell you take your time in every one of them you wright. Keep up the great work and I look forward in talking to you. (:
The Great Beginning
A drink is taken from the glass She falls down on the floor A tear falls down her face ''Why did I do this? ''
The poison bottle lays down next to her She closes her eyes Never to open them again She wishes she could change this now