Water Ballet Poem by Jake Deeds

Water Ballet



The line sailed through the air in reconnaissance
and somewhat suspended above the noise of silence
depositing its' offering only to be declined
Rejection, again, and again, and again
Like a typewriter refusing to go no further the right
demanding satisfaction from the very fingers that brought it to life
But then, just then…….. the present mirroring the former
signals as the water erupts in unequal portions
and the bottom compresses, thrusting the magnificence in the air
for a brief moment….
only to leave visions of a limp lateral line….

Tuesday, February 21, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

A marvellous piece of poetry….a smart attempt and extraordinary effort, thank you for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Jim Hogg 25 February 2012

But the poem didn't get away! .. Reads like a metaphor for all those things that we can't quite capture...but catch a tantalising glimpse of.. ah life...

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success