Jake Deeds

Rookie - 55 Points (5/11/1965 / Arkansas)

An Affair Of The Heart


Two hearts beating, one warm one cold
How will this romance ever unfold
How will the passion ever be told
For the love of God please grant me one wish
Explain my love affair with fish....<><

Submitted: Saturday, March 26, 2011
Edited: Monday, July 25, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 20,980 Points Chinedu Dike (3/25/2015 4:47:00 PM)

    Lovely piece of poetry depicting an affair devoid of warmth and bliss. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated poem written with insight. A beautiful work indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,391 Points Kelly Kurt (3/25/2015 1:28:00 PM)

    Thank you for one of today's little joys. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,463 Points John Richter (3/25/2015 12:44:00 PM)

    hahaha! 'Must be a catch in there somewhere'...! ! ! That's a funny pun! I was trying to think of a good pun too, but since a love affair with a fish took me hook, line and sinker into some kind 'a dark place - I couldn't seem to quite set the hook, so it got away from me. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,394 Points Brian Stafford (3/25/2015 10:59:00 AM)

    There must be a catch in there somewhere? well done! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,958 Points Smoky Hoss (3/25/2015 9:00:00 AM)

    perhaps like the Drunken Dancing Fisherman you should turn to deer instead!
    Good poem, this one. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,842 Points Babatunde Aremu (3/25/2015 8:58:00 AM)

    A nice way to appreciate nature. Good write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,980 Points Chinedu Dike (1/2/2015 5:12:00 PM)

    It's a good write. Humans are warm blooded whereas fishes are cold blooded. There is no bases for the relationship. Two wires can lap nicely only when they zig and zag in unison. Maybe you need to talk to your partner and ascertain what the problem is. I like the articulation of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anthony Burge (4/7/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    I too have a connection with our finned brethren of the saltwater underworld.
    Thanks for the kind feedback Jake, I'm still stumbling around this site and learning the ropes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Jim Hogg (12/13/2011 4:18:00 PM)

    You don't get to choose.. love chooses you Jake! Can't wait for the next instalment... got me laughing.. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points C.R. Clark (7/24/2011 1:31:00 AM)

    They say opposites attract. Good write. Thanks
    Richard (Report) Reply

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