An Affair Of The Heart Poem by Jake Deeds

It's a good write. Humans are warm blooded whereas fishes are cold blooded. There is no bases for the relationship. Two wires can lap nicely only when they zig and zag in unison. Maybe you need to talk to your partner and ascertain what the problem is. I like the articulation of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

A nice way to appreciate nature. Good write!

They say opposites attract. Good write. Thanks Richard

You don't get to choose.. love chooses you Jake! Can't wait for the next instalment... got me laughing.. Thank you.

I too have a connection with our finned brethren of the saltwater underworld. Thanks for the kind feedback Jake, I'm still stumbling around this site and learning the ropes.

Lovely piece of poetry depicting an affair devoid of warmth and bliss. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated poem written with insight. A beautiful work indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Thank you for one of today's little joys.

hahaha! 'Must be a catch in there somewhere'...! ! ! That's a funny pun! I was trying to think of a good pun too, but since a love affair with a fish took me hook, line and sinker into some kind 'a dark place - I couldn't seem to quite set the hook, so it got away from me. :)

There must be a catch in there somewhere? well done!

perhaps like the Drunken Dancing Fisherman you should turn to deer instead! Good poem, this one.