Wandering Cloud Poem by Aufie Zophy
Wandering Cloud
Relaxing in a lazy chair
Casuarina branches, painted on an ever blue sky
A breeze of traveling fresh air
A wondrous white cloud wanders by
Where it will go I am clueless
before long, all again is blueness
I feel a bit lost without
my wandering white wondrous cloud
Bachok,2010
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Where it will go I am clueless before long, all again is blueness I feel a bit lost without my wandering white wondrous cloud Though small its well said with beautiful meanings..especially the last two lines i liked very much can really feel it... Like to read more of your poems so keep writing....
cloud is good poetic symbol...and its wandering my favourite subject... good poem Aufie...imaginative write...10
feel a bit lost without my wandering cloud sense of loss that you describes here is very true, write a poem with the theme sense of loss. innumerable incidents we have in life in which we feel this sense of loss. thank you for sharing. keep high ur poetic sense.
Great imagery, melodious verses creating a peaceful atmosphere..Cristina Teodor
It gives a relaxed feel, as well as leaves with thoughts wandering with the clouds. Keep up the good work :)
A dreamy poem! Ifelt the mood. Enjoyed the read. Love: D
...Relaxing in a lazy chair.. with an only blanket - a white light cloud - very cozy atmosphere of the poem
This poem uses such beautiful imagery. After reading it, I began to see the 'wandering white wondrous cloud' in my mind. Enjoyed reading it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/19/2024 4:41:22 AM # 1.0.0
Delightfully written!