Waltz In The Garden Poem by Marilyn Lott

Waltz In The Garden

Rating: 3.8


Life is very difficult at times
So we must find a special space
To waltz and smile and be happy
I know just the perfect place

Waltz in the garden would be best
With the smell of sweet raw scents
The gentle wind of hopefulness
The grasses thin and bent

For waltzing is a way we can
Get through the unhappy times
And in our beautiful gardens
So many pleasures we will find!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 12 August 2007

Marilyn the imagery was beautiful could almost smell the scents of the flowers and grass. Beautiful my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Ernestine Northover 12 August 2007

Not too good for me Marilyn, as my lawn is on a slope and one ends up toppling over. Ha! Nice flowing piece and a great idea. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Raveendran . 12 August 2007

With sweet scents in the wind, yearning winds in the garden.

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Marilyn Lott

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Washington state USA
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