Wait Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
Wait
Dark sky everywhere
Sullen clouds frown at you
The shadow over your happiness
It makes me blue too
Wait for the rain darling
Heavy rainfall fades the pain
Emerge from the woods dear
Onto the vast open plain
The darkness dimmed and the curtain opened
Lightless stars now visible
The moist breeze happily blows
The sadness now invisible
(2008/11/27)
A very lovely and heartfelt poem, which cuddles smoothly to a reassuring end, letting flows of sadness spread till it loses weight upon the mind and heart.10!
This is a heart felt write, thank you for sharing it with us. Scott
Very clean image has been created! fine similitudes too! ....10+
woww, , this is very cool, , Love it so much! Wait until the star come, and the sadness invisible, , just thinkin about it make my heart so calm, when I sad, i look at the dark sky, and see the star, that make me better... Thanks for this poem, regards, Naru Kaede, ,
very delicatel and superbly written, throughing out your insight.
I see the darkness... Sad... But very nice ending.. KRista
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I would like to translate this poem
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