Undone Poem by Fakeha Siddiqui

Undone

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Walk a long way beyond the strength,
to make it all perfect without leaving a strand,
hairs fall. You loose some kg,
for a little bit perhaps, you feel happy,
Bet you don't know what you're creating,
a burning lava maybe.
Hoping everything will fall in it's place,
All while trying to keep the perfect pace.
It's like you're collecting leaves since ages,
building a shade, yet still in the sun.
how far you go to make it all done,
how sad to know that you are still undone.

are you a stunt man?
do you work in circus?
i see your arms are burnt,
and your eyes say you are hurt.
did you jump through a hoop of fire?
did your aim did this to you?
and does everybody think you are a failure? ...
why cant they just acknowledge your run?
and see... what you have become.
is that life is all about?
us trying to stand straight,
them trying to knock us down.
Oh how far we go to make it all done,
how sad to know that we are still undone.

Friday, December 20, 2013
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
" One must never give up" . " Achievement is guaranteed if you keep on trying" . We hear this so often. The truth is you might not always be successful in getting what you want. Sometimes your efforts do turn out useless. Sometimes you do fail! even if you had drained yourself completely. Somethings are not meant to be; no matter how much you try or how much you wait...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Fakeha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 31 January 2016

A beautiful poem, work is play and play is life.

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Ravi Kant 21 May 2015

Very Nice poetry.... 😊

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Fakeha Siddiqui 26 January 2016

Thank You

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Fakeha Siddiqui 26 January 2016

Thankyou

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