Undivided Attention Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Undivided Attention

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Water flows naturally toward
Slope on the land going down
Your cool vision of hope keeps
Its focus down upon us unnoticed.

We know You stand high above
Letting Your grace land on us
We praise You every way we can
Please grant us Your proximity.

While You take great care of us
You remind us of parental warmth
You let us move forward with poise
Paying attention to every detail.

In this world full of movement always
You provide Your encouraging push
There's no place for any lingering worry
We thus pray You with undivided attention.

Tuesday, November 14, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer,devotion,attraction,water,land,grace,encouragement,worry,world,vision,flow,natural
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 14 November 2023

Words to the supernatural. Our good Lord watches us always

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2023

We thus pray you with undivided attention.....the poet has summed up the things radiantly!

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" this world full of movement "…. Change is the one thing in life that does not change… Nice poem

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