Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Show Me the Path


I ran as fast as I could
To reach You
And You're hiding from me
Impossible to be found.

Why drop this curtain between us?
Show some empathy
Boons I ask not
Just only a smile.

Path to salvation you showed
To many devoted believers
Who sought you before
Show me that path to follow.

I wish to live a spotless life
More precious than all the wealth
I bow to You and surrender
I'm Yours, all Yours now.

Submitted: Monday, July 15, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 09, 2014

Topic of this poem: god


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  • Veteran Poet - 2,864 Points Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    A very good supplication for a spotless life. Ask and ye shall
    receive with faith. With a prayer like yours surely the path will
    be shown. I like this one coming from a sincere heart! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,864 Points Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    A very good supplication for a spotless life. Ask and ye shall
    receive with faith. With a prayer like yours surely the path will
    be shown. I like this one coming from a sincere heart! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,654 Points Ramesh Rai (7/22/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    I wish to live a spotless life
    More precious than all the wealth
    I bow to You and surrender
    I'm Yours, all Yours now. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/18/2013 1:36:00 PM)

    It's a supplication, a mystical write. inner goodness speaks loud and clear. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/18/2013 11:45:00 AM)

    A great conversation emulating prayer. Very pretty. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,446 Points Somanathan Iyer (7/18/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    This is an excellent write. hard to lead a spotless life. but the determination will take towards that. very enjoyable and thoughtful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Benjamin Michael Clark (7/17/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    Very submissive and reassuring. Thank You. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/16/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    A very sincere supplication to God. I love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (7/16/2013 2:17:00 PM)

    Enough findings if one comes up with this in hands:
    I wish to live a spotless life
    More precious than all the wealth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (7/16/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem and prayer. We all need to know the right path to follow. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (7/15/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    A very beautiful prayer! For a person who regards a spotless life as worthier than all other riches, the right path will definitely be shown! A great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/15/2013 12:05:00 PM)

    excellent thoughts in this poem. show me the way to a spotless life. lovely (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,070 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/15/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    I wish to live a spotless life, very good.
    I am yours, all yours now. My heart my soul.10 (Report) Reply

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