Treasure Island

Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Show Me the Path


I ran as fast as I could
To reach You
And You're hiding from me
Impossible to be found.

Why drop this curtain between us?
Show some empathy
Boons I ask not
Just only a smile.

Path to salvation you showed
To many devoted believers
Who sought you before
Show me that path to follow.

I wish to live a spotless life
More precious than all the wealth
I bow to You and surrender
I'm Yours, all Yours now.

Submitted: Monday, July 15, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 09, 2014

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  • Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    A very good supplication for a spotless life. Ask and ye shall
    receive with faith. With a prayer like yours surely the path will
    be shown. I like this one coming from a sincere heart! (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    A very good supplication for a spotless life. Ask and ye shall
    receive with faith. With a prayer like yours surely the path will
    be shown. I like this one coming from a sincere heart! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/22/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    I wish to live a spotless life
    More precious than all the wealth
    I bow to You and surrender
    I'm Yours, all Yours now. (Report) Reply

  • Somanathan Iyer (7/18/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    This is an excellent write. hard to lead a spotless life. but the determination will take towards that. very enjoyable and thoughtful. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (7/16/2013 2:17:00 PM)

    Enough findings if one comes up with this in hands:
    I wish to live a spotless life
    More precious than all the wealth (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (7/16/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem and prayer. We all need to know the right path to follow. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/15/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    A very beautiful prayer! For a person who regards a spotless life as worthier than all other riches, the right path will definitely be shown! A great poem! (Report) Reply

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