Twilight Poem by Sandra Martyres

Lovely poem Sandra. You could very well capture that scene and take us there for few moments. Sometimes your style very much resembles that of Mamta Agarwal, who is a great descriptive poet.

Beautiful writing Sandra. The image of the fireball is superb and the flute's music combined with the sound of the waves and the colors is simply wonderful. 10 love Karin

Sandra, you capture the moment as you touch the horizon of poetry. A very lovely work. :)

The expressiveness of this fine poem was quite exceptional, Sandra, and your imagery in it was superb as well. You painted a vivid and unforgettable scene with your well chosen words in this lovely poem. Carl.

As the sun flees to sink into the edge of the earth, for the day to become the peaceful night, the musician plays a soothing tune to the minds of listeners. Beautiful, serene poem.

Simply beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

There is something of the setting of the sun which seems to make us hold our breath until it submerges..being surrounded with haunting tones of music only increases the sense of a large cathedral in which we open to all existence..lovely word picture here.

that smooth transition which normally goes unnoticed, thnq sandra...

As our sun slowly sinks, to rise upon a different world, our days troubles melt away, a peace that settles down comes over us as twilight turns to night. A lovely time of day. A lovely poem 10+

just as we embrace the day, we should also embrace the night for what it gives us... peace, rest, a time to reflect....and this is what your poem does...