Tiresome Poem by Ben Partenay

Tiresome

Rating: 5.0


I’ve never felt like I could
Unlock that chest
Unlock that door
Unlock that part of me

But the wind blows black
Hands me a key
Hands me a promise
Hands me a steady hand

Sleet falls like little bullets
Pierces the chest
Pierces the heart
Pierces that part of me

And one can’t always hide
In the shadows
In the corner
In that little space of night

It becomes so tiresome

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 13 March 2007

Ben (obiWan) , the dark welcomes you to our side - of the poetic Force! Nicely introspective & economical. Rgds, Ivan

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