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(13 January 1947 / Southport)

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Time

Bang …..

Tick, tock, tick tock,

seconds
minutes
hours

days pass

seasons turn

years
portions of existence

melt
into eternity

Submitted: Friday, August 09, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013


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  • Anthony Di''anno (10/3/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    A lifetime in a moment. Powerful write Val :)

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  • Anthony Di''anno (10/3/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    A lifetime in a moment. Powerful write Val :)

  • Dee Corpolongo (8/27/2013 10:37:00 AM)

    How very short and simple! Just as time flies by, you
    captured it right here in these words! Isn't it funny how
    when we are young, time seems to take forever, yet as
    we age it just flies by! In the blink of an eye! Loved this!

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem..Just in counts we are in eternity, time is flying so fast..
    Very true..good message.
    Loved it.

    ,

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (8/12/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    A very active, fast moving poem - gripping lines

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (8/12/2013 9:58:00 AM)

    You have compressed Time in a nut-shell, Val! Enjoyed!

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/12/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    Time ticks. Seasons and eons pass into eternity. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

  • Sina Farajzadeh (8/12/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    Short and nice. Thanks for sharing...

  • Neela Nath (8/11/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    We are made to melt into eternal.A unique poem on Time.

  • Danny Draper (8/10/2013 8:03:00 PM)

    Terrific, simple, succinct, poignant and beautifully precise.

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