Thinking About You Poem by Theo Williams

Thinking About You

Rating: 5.0


I've been thinking about you
More as each season passes
I've been so cold and so blue
As my heart shatters like glasses.

My words tugged away from me
My thoughts losing their mind
Starting to misplace my sanity
As my heart begins to blind.

I long to hear your voice
To me a sound so angelic
A warmth that I rejoice
More precious than a relic.

Your face starting to fade
But your memory could never
Your eyes were my escapade
Your smile my endeavour.

An accident stole your life
A prince took your heart
You're a princess my wife
That's torn my life apart.

I have bled from my eyes
And wept from my veins
Storms tearing at the skies
As torrents of misery rains.

The sea is no longer blue
The sun no longer shines
I am always thinking of you
But I am running out of time.

My soul has been imbibed
From demons of sorrow
No happiness at my side
Tears of demise will define tomorrow.

I know you know I love you
I know you would never forget
But my memories are askew
The fading I do regret.

Suicide my only friend
Will free me from the blue
This agony will never end
Because every day I think of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

Very poignant and emotive write.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 July 2012

a good work again from my friend. that is so romantic. i like it Theo.

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Alex Medina 03 August 2012

I can relate to this one so easily. One of my favorites of yours.

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Rick Elpers 29 July 2012

Theo good day. Really beautiful sentiment here. For my taste it could flow smoother through the rhyme, maybe even no rhyme and pure prose instead. Otherwise it's really nice. I've been coming through a situation that sticks the same chord. Your words painfully take me back. Hard to read because of that. Which says of the power of this great poem. Keep writing, and move on from her...

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2012

Another nice poetry from you, the way you pull the idea was amazing, it sounds like a simple catchy movie though_Unwritten Soul

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 24 July 2012

what a beautiful romantic poem))))) . it is like a sunlight in the morning))))) it takes my heart))) wonderful work

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 July 2012

a good work again from my friend. that is so romantic. i like it Theo.

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