This Sea Of Tears Poem by Theo Williams
This Sea Of Tears
This sea of tears is a vast wasteland
That a maiden burdens with an imprinted hand
Creating swells and blustery typhoons
Breaking the core of the harvest moon
Causing the tides to differ and change
Producing the sea to painfully rain
Currents of the sea try to catch the maiden
Storms of the skies have forsaken
The sea, for the maiden loved the sky
And this sea of tears could do nothing but cry.
A great poem indeed, hey: 'Theo is a wonderful WORDSMITH, ' I say!
A perfect rhyme! Its realy great, the metaphors are beautiful.
A perfect rhyme! Its realy great, the metaphors are beautiful.
I like these two lines especially: Breaking the core of the harvest moon Causing the tides to differ and change
the maidens tears are torrential and disasterous. i see now why the pirates didn't want them onboard their ships. nicely done.
The rhyme is awesome, especially the last one, imagery also printed well in this poem, well done Theo_Unwritten Soul
A perfect rhyme! Its realy great, the metaphors are beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 7:03:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is just phenomenal. Wow. I loved it.10/10 great work. Continue writing.