The 'X' Factor Poem by kanav justa

The 'X' Factor

Rating: 5.0


When I had “X” money
“three” called me honey
days were sunny

as I was a fine player
By gambling plus some prayer
“X” became 'X' square

Water became wine
“THREE” became “NINE”
They said they were all mine

But soon inflation inflated
With time “X” abated
And since “NINE” with “X” were related
No further with me they dated

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anush Gupta 18 May 2013

Very relevant and delivering a philosophical message.

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Dave Walker 20 May 2013

A great poem with a wonderful flow.

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David Wood 20 May 2013

Great flow and rythem to this poem.

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Unwritten Soul 20 May 2013

They aXed you? well that because X is your factor...axed or be an ex..lol joking, nice wording! ! _Soul

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Captain Cur 20 May 2013

Romance is like a game of chance, where Y becomes exasperated. Nice write

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Rishabh Bidya 07 February 2014

Hahahaha! ! ! Nice work, Kanav! ! ! ! You've followed rules of mathematics too: D

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Divya Gupta 02 November 2013

Lolz..i realy enjoyed dis poem..i had a big smile while reading dis poem..u r a grt poet yaarr! ! : -)

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Hazel Durham 24 May 2013

Very quirky and fun with great rhythm and flow! I really enjoyed this great write!

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Jahan Zeb 23 May 2013

Very interesting. I loved it. One of your best. The flow the idea, the mood of the poet, all clear from the lines. mature.

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Ruby Mostazir 21 May 2013

Interesting! Actually da fact is so true......... A great poem i love dis!

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