The Spirit Of Unity A Found Poem For Children Poem by Indira Renganathan

The Spirit Of Unity A Found Poem For Children

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Long ago there lived four friends in a jungle
A deer, a crow, a mouse and a turtle

One day a hunter appeared on the scene
Except the turtle all else fled off the scene

The hunter easily caught and put the turtle in his bag
But the friends quickly planned to free him from the bag

The crow flew high up in the sky to locate the hunter
As per the plan the deer ran past the hunter

And lay on his path as if he was dead
The hunter saw the deer lying likely to be dead

Elated, he put down the bag and ran to pick up the deer
But wise mouse cut open the bag for the turtle to clear

But before the hunter reached the deer
The deer got up and ran into the forest near

The disappointed hunter turned back to collect the turtle
But found him gone back to the river in the jungle

The hunter left the jungle totally dejected
Thereupon the four friends happily long lived united

Team spirit is the core of achieving a success
It is strengthened by helping each other in a crisis

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Below is the original text for this found poem taken from 'The New Sunday Express Magazine', part of the daily newspaper 'The New Indian Express' group Modern Panchatantra At Work Long ago there lived four friends in a jungle-a deer, a crow, a mouse and a turtle. One day a hunter appeared on the scene. Everyone disappeared fast, but the turtle couldn't. The hunter caught him and put him in his bag. The turtle's friends worried for their friend. They devised a plan to free him from the hunter. The crow flew high up in the sky to locate the hunter. As per the plan the deer ran past the hunter and lay on his path as if dead. The hunter saw the deer lying on the ground. Elated, he put down the bag, which had the turtle and ran to pick up the deer. Meanwhile the mouse cut open the bag and freed the turtle who hurriedly crawled into the river water. But before the hunter reached the deer he suddenly got up and bottled into the forest. The disappointed hunter turned back to collect the turtle he had left behind on the ground. But he was shocked to see the bag cut open and the turtle missing. The hunter left the jungle dejected. The friends once again lived happily. Moral: Team spirit is the core of achieving a common goal. It is strengthened by helping each other in crisis. Even the most difficult of the tasks are not impossible to perform if taken up unitedly.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 22 June 2023

Impossibilities can be surpassed with cooperation and team spirit. Very nicely written. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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M. Asim Nehal 23 June 2023

Fabulous poem on the found article, very articulate. Full *****

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Nabakishore Dash 23 June 2023

Unity is strength' very beautifully narrated Mam.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 July 2023

A beautiful story with a meaningful message. A must read for all specially children. A well expressed and crafted poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2023

Congratulations for having this poem chosen as Poem Of The Day. A wonderful poem so well presented!

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Bharati Nayak 27 July 2023

Hearty congratulations Madam for this poem being selected as the Poem of the Day!

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Bharati Nayak 27 July 2023

A great poem with a nice story and well piece of wisdom.For success of any meaningful project where teamwork is involved, cooperation of team members is very crucial.

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Nabakishore Dash 27 July 2023

Congrats madam Renganathan for the beautiful poem that is selected as pod.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2023

A precious poem with moral that team spirit is so crucial for achieving a common goal. Dear madam, you deserve this very commendable accolade. Many congratulations! !

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