A Sweet Disturbance Poem by Indira Renganathan

A Sweet Disturbance

Rating: 5.0


Butterflies in her
Heart
She's not able to
Control
They flutter in
Fluttering rounds
Restlessly

Disturbed, perturbed
She murmurs
'Hey go away all
Settle in the sun
Get burnt

Her murmuring, he hears
His one glance on her..
There! the sunflower
In his heart

And
The sun
In her eyes

Singing a duet
Two butterflies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 03 April 2023

Brilliant! ! ! Great imagery and similes...Loved it. To my fav list

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 April 2023

Beautiful, brilliant and awesome like the butterflies and the sun flowers, dear Indira Ma'm.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 April 2023

Loved the poem. Top marks and stars + to my favourite

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Lovely romantic poem. Enjoyed. And congratulations, Indira Madam. For, this poem has secured a pride of place in the Best Poems of Members on PoemHunter, within just two days of its publication

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2023

Number 17 today, Unnikrishnan.

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Beautiful poem! Butterflies and sunflowers. Both are deserving caresses by the Sun

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Made a revisit today…

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2023

Dear madam, this wonderful poem is placed at # 15 position among top 100 poems today! Many congratulations to you dear madam.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2023

CONGRATULATIONS being ranked as #17 in Best Member Poems in the Top 100. I am truly happy for you, dear Indira Madame.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2023

A beautiful and loveliest poem, so artistically rendered and fantastically worded. I have enjoyed tremendously. Top Marks and to my Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing

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