Indira Renganathan


Alankar(Decor) -87


A Recipe(Uneven Couplet) -
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A Recipe

That you would relish I'm sure
This recipe try it with pleasure

Clean the insight in time sufficient
Wash off anger, enmity and hate

Put the mind on the burning heart
Put in the thoughts all to melt

Ladle in between a large of intellect
Stir in hope a heapful amount

Let all blend with a bliss intent
Until valour and courage result

Throw meantime in the flaming heart
Burnt to ashes filth and lust

Fervid heart now isn't violent
Mind is calm and tranquil incessant

Mix in now gently prayers and spirit
Still more gently the gods to let meditate

Season with peace and harmony pleasant
Garnish with joy and cheer concordant

Serve in the bowl of soul consonant
Enjoy with love consistent

Try and taste this recipe carefully
Tell me 'delicious, delicious' finally

Submitted: Monday, August 04, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, September 26, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Alankar(Decor) -87 by Indira Renganathan )

  • Rookie Allie Lusha (3/18/2010 5:28:00 AM)

    Indira a very insightful write, beautifully scribed with a flow of positivity, a recipe made in heaven... very enjoyable. I thank you for you welcome and kind comments on my poetry....Enjoy your day! ...Allie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kannan G (3/5/2010 11:38:00 PM)

    A wonderful recipe for the health, growth and peace of body, mind and soul. Warm regards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (8/19/2009 12:40:00 PM)

    So happy to see a title Recipe, my stomach sounded happy too, cause I was fed up with all that hotel food, ended up with a recipe for the soul which made my soul happy too........ Brilliant, meaningful write. Very pleasant and wise....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (8/16/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    a very meaningful write
    very wonderful recipe..
    tasteful for the soul....
    We can get lessons from here..
    brilliant and wisdom thoughts
    10+++

    lovelots,

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Vanita Thakkar (8/1/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    It is delicious indeed! ! Relished it.
    Vanita. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (7/30/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    Your recipe for love and life has a lovely flow to it Indria (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (7/13/2009 5:23:00 AM)

    Your recipe, madam, is just perfect to kill the five demons in all! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Lewis (7/4/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    Nice rhyme scheme, nice general theme. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rinzu Susan Rajan (6/22/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    A THOUGHTFUL POEM WITH GOOD USAGE OF RHYMES...

    : -)

    LOVELY RECIPE

    : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Wojja Fink (6/11/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    Indira...as you do not allow
    messages, did you notice
    you left two different comments
    on Kingdom of Poemhunter? regards Wojja. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/31/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    This is an outstanding work—we must love this recipe.
    My 10 is added to it for this great job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/28/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    This is certainly a recipe to mix and cook with wisdom. You have put so much thought into this piece and wouldn't it be great to take a bite, and like a magic wand, we would be happy evermore.
    Wonderful poem Indira. Top marks Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Ravi A (4/17/2009 11:14:00 AM)

    A really delicious recipe. This recipe contains all the essence of philosophy. A very good work. Very clear and lucid to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Chandrashekar A Posy Poet (3/28/2009)

    soooooooooooooooo........ delicious! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jasmin Whyte (3/21/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    lovely imagery, depth and wisdom contained in these lines. delicious! delicious! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonya Florentino (3/8/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    i'm going to try this one out for dinner tonight! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmad Shiddiqi (2/23/2009 10:59:00 PM)

    wise advice! wonderful! keep writing!
    Dear, friend. If time permits. Please read and comment on my newest poem, A Tale of India (on page 2) . Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points C.R. Clark (2/8/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    A delicious recipe for fine living....10..
    Richard (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/7/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    WoW! ! ! ! this is a great recipe for life...10% of this and that...to make our world a better place to live in...in peace and harmony together in unity...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (1/22/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    What an insightfull write... If we all used this recipe what a better place this world would be.... I enjoy the wonderfull peacefull theme you mainted through out this write.. This is by far very very good.....

    Bonnie (Report) Reply

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