Alankar(Decor) -89 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor) -89

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Simply Couplets-2(uneven couplet)


Packed as if two elephants
Dumped in two suitcases

Checked the air port if weightless
The obese suitcases

The destination a beauty chilly
On reach bitten by a weather chilly

But cold is always better than a cold sweat
On return meeting back my maid servant

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Avani Sirsikar 08 May 2021

Indeed, we must all become the chefs for preparing this recipe of life and savour it with delight! Great way to put your thoughts through such a poem👍🏻

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 November 2017

Dear, madam your research on uneven couplet and its demonstration with a great poem is noteworthy and admirable! Thank you for illuminating us! ..10

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Shimon Weinroth 29 September 2008

airports and baggage and the blight of luggage impediments of traveling, well done in couplets cheers Shimon

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