The Rat And The Piece Of Cheese! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

The Rat And The Piece Of Cheese!

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Gnawing me
tiny, tiny
as a mouse to a piece of cheese
small, insistently
inside me

as if I had
sin
as if I'd blame
as if I was wrong...

there... aching...
trying to annoy me
not letting me sleep

gnawing me...
the rat and the piece of cheese
inside my chest

and Iam bursting
this feelings
here outside.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I think that happens with the others too. A feeling inside. And i just wanted sleep!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 05 April 2013

Find things that help you feel the most comfortable as you can...when you indulge your senses, you illuminate your mind to be calmer and then you will fine again...p/S nowadays rat not eat cheese anymore, they prefer pizza hahahaha joking_Soul

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Nader Baheri 06 April 2013

sure it has happened for all of us.life is so stressful.just think you are not alone in having such rats, gnawing u from inside~nb

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2015

“Iam” bursting. : 0 my favorite lines: “gnawing me... the rat and the piece of cheese inside my chest” VERY AGGRAVATING! I can almost feel it, but luckily I can’t . bri :)

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Sekharan Pookkat 05 May 2013

Prick of conscious Gnawing slowly And itches heart with sleepless nights Thoughts of hope will wipe our sins And pray God To clear out debts

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Farah Ilyas 15 April 2013

it has happened for all of us...nice poem

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Chandra Thiagarajan 06 April 2013

Yes! When there are gnawing thoughts your sleep goes to sleep and you're devoid of it! Of course, it happens!

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Gilia Shai 06 April 2013

Thank you Thomas. No doubt, it could be made up. That would be a good joke. I enjoyed the pizza. :)

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