The Luminous Shadow Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Luminous Shadow

Rating: 5.0


Bit by bit
The light increased
I feel secure in its luminous shadow
Others empathy
Decreased

(2008/12/5)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 05 December 2008

Simply perfect...thank you

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Meggie Gultiano 05 December 2008

this is simply beautiful

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 December 2008

In epitome emitted a lot. Fine reflection 10+

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Lynda Robson 05 December 2008

You have a wonderful way with words, this is just lovely,10 Lynda xx

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Tsira Goge 05 December 2008

Gentle and beautiful... A sad song....10... Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 05 December 2008

Luminous is the perfect way to describe this poem. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra

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<font color =fusha>Amy 05 December 2008

beautiful in all it's simplicity great piece 10: D

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