Thomas Adams

Rookie (Sedalia, Mo.)

The Love You're Putting In


Keep the gaggle of friends you choose,
all bundled for the night.
Think not the precious things you lose.
Not chose those friendlies right.

And now the loving words have changed;
replaced by common threat.
Seek ye live your life to wrong
gaze back to where you're at.

No hope for you to walk to long
down narrow passage ways.
And hope so deep with-in your heart
or dream the day he stays.

It's not all that you get from him
that marks the race is won.
It's all the love you're putting in
That keeps him there til dawn.

Thomas Adams
The Poetaster Jul/2013

Submitted: Saturday, July 27, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013

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Comments about this poem (The Love You're Putting In by Thomas Adams )

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/27/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    It's not all that you get from him
    that marks the race is won.
    It's all the love you're putting in
    That keeps him there til dawn

    amazing poetry! (Report) Reply

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