Thomas Adams

Rookie (Sedalia, Mo.)

'Hearts Beat Even, Fast! ' - Poem by Thomas Adams

So on to grey and misty sight.
The 'dare' to passers by.
Let us lightly sip the liquid night.
Pray, not sure fully, why? '

To gleem unanswer'd cowardly,
allow it steam abit.
Then bump and burst and truely be!
All darned and confidant.

Let eyes take in the crystal blues,
while greens and yellows pair.
Lead reds and whites, the rosey hues;
all color'd love affair.

A winterstone to shape the rhyme.
with whiter alabast.
For now's the time to bet your dime.
on 'Hearts Beat Even, Fast!


Comments about 'Hearts Beat Even, Fast! ' by Thomas Adams

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (10/16/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    I like these lines:
    ...For now's the time to bet your dime.
    on 'Hearts Beat Even, Fast! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,735 Points Ramesh Rai (9/26/2013 10:34:00 PM)

    Let eyes take in the crystal blues,
    while greens and yellows pair.
    Lead reds and whites, the rosey hues;
    all color'd love affair.
    a beautiful vision. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Badboy Vibes (8/4/2013 2:20:00 AM)

    A nice poem...Well done...I enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,723 Points Dave Walker (8/4/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    A great poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 12, 2013


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