The Journey Poem by Andrew Lunel

The Journey



Placed on the spiral metal
Looking at the above to a single point
Hearing the crickets make their nightly music
The occasional bat cuts my sight
In the distraction I can hear the frogs nearby join the rhythm
And the clouds seek a victory over the moon
Forever trying though
I hear pain and joy from the faint night
People talking to others seeking their connection
Evil thoughts out the purity of the holy mind
A question of life held in the hand of god
And the answer in the other
The dogs next door bark at the ghostly figures returning home
To a home where the bonds grow and die
And
Silence is gone
Peace has gone
Freedom survives in the hearts of man
Pain in their seed with a hope of greatness
Two ducks fighting for the same fish
Yet the hungry sometimes stay hungry
Just ready to fight for the next fish
Looking over the edge of silence
Knowing its descent would scream
Drowning in a river of passive roughness
And looking at the calm shores
Nature’s fury in absolute peace
Our fever just brings us the truth of life
Our rushes and urges swell
And we ride them
We wait for the right wave and ride it with fury
And return to the calm shores
To sleep eternally with the waves that hit the shore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathan Martin 06 January 2010

hey your poems are good i think you have a stong sense of the world around you that means you should have a lot to write about, i am 30 i have been writing on and off for the last 10 years and it has been and is an evolving process, really it is finding your voice and being creative. having the courage to change or shift and feel, its medicine for tough guys. poetry helps me unharden and feel. just keep writing for yourself. keep it up nate

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