The Conference Of The Nightingales Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

our wishes are heavy with many sparkles like ripe moon bearing down the crystal lake that flies across to Greenland, and sings aloud interesting, well write dear Ahmad you as usuall

The phrases used in this piece are chosen with care - - 'the ripe moon' being one of them is especially evocative.10/10 from Fay.

I've not seen a nightingale but I know it's a bird specie. And I know one Nightingale who was loving and kind, she was the patron of all care givers or a nurse during one of the forgotten European wars. Wish we all have that kind of soul mate. I agree with our poet friends, the phrases and practically the lines are well written, carefully thought and choosen. You deserve a 10.

Ilove heavy with many sparkles.... and... the ripe moon.

Very placid feeling from the words.

I like the concept of this poem, it is artistic.

Dear Shiddiqui, Thanks for your invite, Liked the poem for its originality and the universal intellectual message.Highly rated. Request you to read and comment upon my poem 'A MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR' Rajkumar

The pleasure in servitude, Comes to meet the art and skills within, It is in the beauty of knowing thine art, Against the vulgar naked greed that lies within.

A real pleasure to read. do go on.

oh how good! kudos sir!