A Cloud Came Down Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

nice symbolistic poem, very well written.......10

Clouds coming near as rain is a good sign no doubt.

this is a very nice peice :) i loved it

A cloud descending on the ground representing peace has finally arrived in a place.

I like that sort of cloud..... Ruthy

nice poem, and happy idul fitri

Clouds can be beautiful or ominous, here it brings peace and tranquility. Good thoughts and sentiment and speaks of what the world needs in brief.

It gave me a lovely feeling. If you have time try 'Shower.'

Brief poems are the best, this one says more with less. good use of imagery and word flow. thanks for sharing

rain came down..it cools the place..