The Conference Of The Hearts Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

The Conference Of The Hearts

Rating: 4.9


Love has its own beauty
but we place deep below
these sensation charms

from the soul
that we have been
make us pure, Love

none of our words will show
we touch and sigh and dream
and wish we were the mere dust

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 11 January 2010

You started well. All the lines ran smoothly carrying pure and profound meaning of love. 'Love has its own beauty...' Very nicely written. Thumbs up!

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Joseph Poewhit 11 January 2010

We will all be dust soon

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 11 January 2010

Hi AhmjadYour conference of the heart's words flowed nicely down the page. Love has a life of it own and is embodied with beauty.10+++

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Omar Ibrahim 11 January 2010

you returned from a long break! that's a wonderful poem mainly i like short poem which are simple but it's intent is huge like this poem....a good poet can write a lot in few lines...thanks for sharing.

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Lynn Glover 11 January 2010

I've never seen a conference of the heart until now and it is very good. A good write your friend Lynn

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Obinna Eruchie 20 February 2010

Love shines as light in bright beauty to perceived by warm hearts amidst the challenges of life. An enchanting poem about love.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 25 January 2010

a good contest! Heart the symbol of LOVE I like your conference! ! ! ! LOVE LOVE LOVE, the cure for all diseases!

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 16 January 2010

Dear Shiddiqui, Thanks for your invite. I liked the poem for its free flowing style and deep meaning.. Love in truest form is only next to God. Nice use of choicest vocabs. Rated Highly. Request you to read my poem ACROSTICS and comment thereupon Rajkumar

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 15 January 2010

A pure poem well penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Anthony Foster 12 January 2010

The downside of love is deep, The slippery slope is steep, Yet for all that we chance the joy, Of for a monster that can so easy destroy.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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