Symbol Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Symbol

Rating: 5.0


To sacrifice our love
To immolate ourselves
In a ceremonial way

Unbelievable rationale
Incredible goal
We have to obey

Abraham and Jacob
Lot and Noah
Wanted to say

Love comes to bless
The turf that wraps
Our heavenly clay

(2009/4/25)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2009

Unbelievable rationale Incredible goal We have to obey gr8 words of wisdom!

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Barry A. Lanier 25 April 2009

Wisdom coming from 'way back' and ironic....it hasn't changed....surely there must be a reason....

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Sandra Fowler 25 April 2009

Love is ageless. Your last lines are very beautiful. Always your friend, Sandra

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~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2009

Stunning as always my friend, best of luck with your book release. You're a natural

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Evaughn Gray 25 April 2009

True love is just an unbelivable thing to have in life i'm so grateful to have true love in mine..! Hazel G.E

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

'Love comes to bless The turf that wraps Our heavenly clay' Nice lovely poem,10++

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Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

The symbol of love, the sacrifices and its blessings all comes together in marriage. Great poem! ! !

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Nasreen Dawood 02 May 2009

deep and true...once marked with love the heavenly clay will bear the mark...the symbol...thanx for the beautiful piece.

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a wonderful and meaningful poem

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Seema Chowdhury 27 April 2009

very very nice and touchy poem.

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