Storing Golden Threads Poem by Heather Burns

Storing Golden Threads

Rating: 5.0


This morning I arose
suitcase packed
ready for the journey
leaving within the hour

Laura lee and friends
are waiting for me

The atmosphere there
is quite and serene
it is springtime the
meadows are ablaze with
color

Beautiful flowers awaken
from their winters nap

Laura lee is at the
spinning wheel spinning
threads of gold for my
welcome home

Levi is storing threads
for safe keeping until
the proper time arrives

when I will return home.

AUTHORS NOTE:
dedicated to my parents
Levi/Laura Burns

Thursday, July 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: arthurian
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 07 July 2014

The mystery in this baffles me. Could this be a somewhat allegorical telling of a final trip to parents who have already crossed over? A fascinating write.

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Valsa George 05 July 2014

A beautiful dedication to your parents..... A dedication to all parents who eagerly look forward to the homecoming of their dear children! Enjoyed!

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I love this vent poem with a spiritual touch.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 July 2014

Beautiful dedication. Everyone awaits for the proper time.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2014

For old parents it's a matter of great joy that their daughter is coming back home and the daughter's dedication in a sweet poem is another joy.

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Smoky Hoss 02 September 2014

The place from which we come, is the place to where we go; the place above all time, where all love is gathered together.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

Beautiful dedication to your loving parents, woven with a beautiful Golden Threads of love, which no one can break. So is the love for the parents. Loved reading it.

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A touching, tranquil tapestry that takes a common cotton garment and make something compelling and creative. Well done my friend!

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Ken E Hall 15 July 2014

Lovely poem on your parents love golden threads beautiful words for their memories stored...regards

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Shania K. Younce 10 July 2014

The poem has an off on flow. Which, I find intriguing. Bien!

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