Stars Are Playing Poem by ramesh rai

Stars Are Playing

Rating: 5.0


Stars are playing throughout night
wide sky has become playground
Moon has become the football
stars are playing all over night
Great bear is the referee of game
there are more stars watching the match
as the audience of the match
all stars player played with full spirit
Finally, the morning star declared the result
the match ended with thank-offering of sun
the entire creation rejoiced the game throughout day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 June 2013

Stars are playing and more stars watching. Nicely written poem. Please read my poem 'Counting Stars' which is in line with yours. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 21 June 2013

A great poem with a great flow to it.

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Elena Sandu 21 June 2013

Beautiful poem, loved it! Next time when I will have my eyes on stars may try to imagine your poem. I think you were very brave to follow the entire game. Could I resist, the end may find me in deep sleep. Or maybe then my dreams would create a different game?

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David Wood 22 June 2013

This poem flows very well, a lovely write.

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Hazel Durham 22 June 2013

Great imagination and beautifully written with panache!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 July 2013

Wow...beautiful poem....Football match played well..well written.

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Kevin Halls 25 June 2013

As a Football fan I enjoyed this. Footballers often say after a game that they're over the Moon, now we know why!

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Valsa George 23 June 2013

What a splendid match played on the firmament on all days of fair weather and how we watch it sitting in our balconies and galleries! Enjoyed!

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Survi Sharma 23 June 2013

beautiful poem greatly penned

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Superb poem, beautifully written. Siya_! !

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